A nitpicky comment, but related to what we've been talking about in Working with Words: Sarah Fiske, a professor of psychology at Princeton University, said, "This is just the first study which was focused on the idea," but she should have used "that" instead. According to Working with Words, "'That' introduces a clause not set off by parentheses, dashes, or commas," and since the quote includes no nonessential clause, it is not necessary to use "which."Full text: Men see bikini-clad women as objects, psychologists say

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