Thursday, May 7, 2009

mistake #48

It's probably not a good sign when you spell a word wrong in the headline.

Full text: More on Andrews, and femeninity in sports

mistake #47

In elementary school, I learned that the dollar sign ($) meant dollars. Therefore, one could reason that writing "$50 dollars" is redundant, right?

Full text: Stern extends Bulls-Celtics series to best-of-11

mistake #46

This story from CollegeCandy.com made a few AP Style errors. First, "all right" is ALWAYS two words, never one. Second, both letters must be capitalized in the word "OK."

Full text: (Earth Friendly) Things That Make Me Go "Ew"

mistake #45

The misspelling of the word "capische" in this DrakeMag Online blog wouldn't have been so obvious if it hadn't been tacked on to the end of a paragraph, just hanging there in its misery. Webster could have solved this problem.

Full text: Outside of Mario, One-ups Suck

mistake #44

Oops. Most readers would know that this incorrect spelling was referring to designer Christian Louboutin, but the misspelling looks unprofessional from a magazine that knows fashion.

Full text: The Best Ways to Keep Track of Your Money

mistake #43

An extra comma after "madness" distracts readers away from the point of the sentence in this MarieClaire.com article. Someone should have looked over her story before she posted it..

Full text: Easy Green: Save Paper, Stop Phone Book Deliveries

mistake #42

In this article from my local newspaper, the facts don't match up. Why would this woman be a kindergarten student at a high school? I believe the writer meant to say, "She was a kindergarten student at Rosemount Elementary School."

Full text: Berenz is the choice for superintendent