The problem with this Internet democracy we have is that you can't exclude individuals with bad grammar. In Sen. Adil Khan's comment, he wrote, "When Senator's look past self interest." Because he was referring to "Senators" as a plural noun, the apostrophe was unnecessary. "Self interest" should appear as "self-interest" because "self" is a modifier. Also, "Senators" should not be capitalized, because he is referring to a group of people rather than to an individual with a specific title. He did get it right later in the comment.On a separate note, "Students" should not be capitalized in the second anonymous comment.

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