Tuesday, February 24, 2009

mistake #18

In a story that ran in Monday's issue of The Times-Delphic, the writer interviewed Eric Gudmundson, a member of the group that oversees PMACs and plans Welcome Weekend activities. However, his last name was spelled incorrectly every time it was used, with the exception of his introduction in the story. Maybe the writer had a sticky "d" key..

Full text: PMACs play important role in first-year transition to college

Monday, February 23, 2009

mistake #17

Last night, as I was watching the Oscars, I was caught up by a grammatically awkward moment during Reese Witherspoon's presentation of the award for Best Achievement in Directing, won by "Slumdog Millionaire."

Witherspoon said, "The director is a grand collaborator, taking inspiration from all the artists around them to create one singular vision."

"The director" is singular, but she uses a plural pronoun later on in the statement. Although it would be awkward to say, "Directors are grand collaborators," or "from all the artists around him or her," perhaps in this situation it might have worked to use just "him," since all the nominated movies had male directors.

Video: Danny Boyle (Slumdog Millionaire) - Best Director - Oscars 2008 (81st Academy Awards)
The statement takes place at about the 44-second mark.

mistake #16

I know that "forsook" is the correct past tense of "forsake." But that doesn't mean I don't think it's weird. As a writer, I would avoid using this word at all costs. Clearly this Gawker writer thought differently.

Full text: Secretly, the Oscars Have Always Been This Gay

mistake #15

Fmylife.com is a website where individuals anonymously post their negative daily experiences. In this entry, an individual wrote, "Today, I was at my ex-girlfriends house, whom I still have a major crush on."

"Ex-girlfriends" should have an apostrophe before the "s" because it is possessive, but the major issue in this entry is that the sentence implies that the writer has a major crush on his ex-girlfriend's house. Oops.

Sunday, February 22, 2009

mistake #14

Aside from the "is your" part of this status that makes no sense, this Facebook user should have used "you're" instead of "your." Because she means to say "you are like a hard candy," (whatever that means), "you're" is the only option.

I hope this doesn't get me in trouble. Ha.

mistake #13

Another thing that bugs me: the comma in the yellow box is just unnecessary.

mistake #12

It seems that another grammar fiend found this error before I did, but this sign from second-floor Meredith was post-worthy anyways. "Whomever" is not correct, as indicated by the scribbles the anonymous editor made over the "m." Because it would be incorrect to say, "Him has the key," we know that "whoever" should be used instead.

(The sign also implies that the key is still in the box, but clearly it is missing. It should say something like, "Whoever has the key from this box," or "Whoever has the key that belongs in this box.")

mistake #11

I'm a terrible person. Over the weekend, I went to a social function with "I'm on a Boat" (a popular song) as the theme. Individuals wore nautical clothing, sailor hats, etc. One group of girls decorated their own t-shirts quoting lyrics from the song.

Although four of the girls had quoted the lyrics with as much grammatical accuracy as can be expected from rap lyrics, the fifth girl wrote "swim-trunks" instead of "swim trunks" on her shirt, and it bugged me all afternoon. "Swim trunks" does not need hyphenation - it is two separate words.

mistake #10

Elections for Student Senate Executive Officers are coming up, and as individuals try to one-up each other through posts to their Facebook groups and careful poster placement, one individual was less than meticulous with his grammar.

This individual writes, "I want to set a president in dolling out that money, if groups.." A colon or new sentence should follow the word "money," but the more glaring error is the incorrect use of the word "president" for "precedent" - two words that sound similar, but mean entirely different things. Since this candidate is running for Student Body President, perhaps his thoughts were turned to the glory of the title as he wrote his platform.

(Other minor errors in this paragraph: "junior" should be plural, "benefits" should be substituted for the passive "is benefiting.")

Thursday, February 19, 2009

mistake #9

A nitpicky comment, but related to what we've been talking about in Working with Words: Sarah Fiske, a professor of psychology at Princeton University, said, "This is just the first study which was focused on the idea," but she should have used "that" instead. According to Working with Words, "'That' introduces a clause not set off by parentheses, dashes, or commas," and since the quote includes no nonessential clause, it is not necessary to use "which."

Full text: Men see bikini-clad women as objects, psychologists say

mistake #8

The original error I found was from the commercial for Glade PlugIns Scented Oil Lasting Impressions, a new fan-powered air freshener product.

In the commercial, a woman says, "It's the longest lasting PlugIns ever!" Although "PlugIns" is the name of the product, "it's" means "it is," and so it doesn't agree with "PlugIns," which is plural. The woman should have said something like, "They are the longest lasting PlugIns ever!"

When I did a Google search to find out the complete name of the product, I came across a coupon on their website for the product, which incorrectly spells "freshener" as "freshner." Someone at SC Johnson has clearly been slacking off lately.

mistake #7

Just a simple typo, but the word "casion," judging from the context, should be replaced with "casino." This mistake comes from the Rosemount Town Pages, a weekly newspaper from a Twin Cities suburb. (On a side note, I wrote for this newspaper in high school, so finding these errors is a little more fun for me.) These types of errors are not uncommon, so expect more from the Town Pages in the future.

Full text: Felony burglary charges filed against man suspected of taking cash from St. Joseph's school

mistake #6

The problem with this Internet democracy we have is that you can't exclude individuals with bad grammar. In Sen. Adil Khan's comment, he wrote, "When Senator's look past self interest." Because he was referring to "Senators" as a plural noun, the apostrophe was unnecessary. "Self interest" should appear as "self-interest" because "self" is a modifier. Also, "Senators" should not be capitalized, because he is referring to a group of people rather than to an individual with a specific title. He did get it right later in the comment.

On a separate note, "Students" should not be capitalized in the second anonymous comment.

mistake #5

A grammar "oops" from one of my own classmates - sorry! While this student wrote that "someone is still not use to writing or typing 2009," I must suggest substituting "used" for "use." All in the name of accountability?

mistake #4

This excerpt from Gawker.com mentions Samantha Power's "unspecified 'gesture to bury the hatched,'" an attempt to use the common phrase "bury the hatchet." I'm not sure if the error falls on Power or on the writer of this post, but my first response to this quote was, "Bury the hatched what?"

Full text: Professor Who Called Clinton 'Monster' To Work With Her

mistake #3

I admit that I am sports-illiterate, but even I know that this headline on ESPN.com should say "Streak in Jeopardy" and not "Steak." Although personally, I would be much more concerned if steak was in jeopardy.

mistake #2

Not exactly a recent example, but this movie title has always bugged me. The word "weeks" should be both plural and possessive, so the correct title would be "Two Weeks' Notice."

mistake #1

This gem of a banner incorrectly uses "there's" - meaning "there is," to refer to the "many reasons," which is clearly plural. Instead, this sign should read, "There are so many reasons to love it," or something similar. Nice job, Tampa.