This MarieClaire.com story is just missing a comma, but the punctuation error makes it difficult to understand the writer's meaning. There should be a comma after "talks," and I'd like to see one after "behaves" too - but that's just my preference:"I think many women feel like they know Michelle Obama because she's very real, in the way she talks, the way she behaves, and, yes, in the way she dresses."
Full text: 11 Ways to Get Michelle Obama's Style
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