Thursday, May 7, 2009

mistake #48

It's probably not a good sign when you spell a word wrong in the headline.

Full text: More on Andrews, and femeninity in sports

mistake #47

In elementary school, I learned that the dollar sign ($) meant dollars. Therefore, one could reason that writing "$50 dollars" is redundant, right?

Full text: Stern extends Bulls-Celtics series to best-of-11

mistake #46

This story from CollegeCandy.com made a few AP Style errors. First, "all right" is ALWAYS two words, never one. Second, both letters must be capitalized in the word "OK."

Full text: (Earth Friendly) Things That Make Me Go "Ew"

mistake #45

The misspelling of the word "capische" in this DrakeMag Online blog wouldn't have been so obvious if it hadn't been tacked on to the end of a paragraph, just hanging there in its misery. Webster could have solved this problem.

Full text: Outside of Mario, One-ups Suck

mistake #44

Oops. Most readers would know that this incorrect spelling was referring to designer Christian Louboutin, but the misspelling looks unprofessional from a magazine that knows fashion.

Full text: The Best Ways to Keep Track of Your Money

mistake #43

An extra comma after "madness" distracts readers away from the point of the sentence in this MarieClaire.com article. Someone should have looked over her story before she posted it..

Full text: Easy Green: Save Paper, Stop Phone Book Deliveries

mistake #42

In this article from my local newspaper, the facts don't match up. Why would this woman be a kindergarten student at a high school? I believe the writer meant to say, "She was a kindergarten student at Rosemount Elementary School."

Full text: Berenz is the choice for superintendent

mistake #41

I don't know if this was just a formatting thing, but this MarieClaire.com story seemed to use dashes and hyphens interchangeably, which I know is incorrect. There should be dashes in between "ex" and "now's," and later in between "get" and "meet" -- in both cases, two separate ideas that need more separation than just a hyphen provides.

Full text: 6 Post-Breakup Remedies

not-a-mistake #40

There was no mistake in this piece, just beautiful writing. (Ironic, in a sentence about how writing doesn't have to be beautiful.) This section popped out at me - I don't often get to see writing like this on the Web. Well done, Marie Claire.

Full text: 6 Post-Breakup Remedies

mistake #39

This MarieClaire.com story is just missing a comma, but the punctuation error makes it difficult to understand the writer's meaning. There should be a comma after "talks," and I'd like to see one after "behaves" too - but that's just my preference:

"I think many women feel like they know Michelle Obama because she's very real, in the way she talks, the way she behaves, and, yes, in the way she dresses."

Full text: 11 Ways to Get Michelle Obama's Style

mistake #38

This Twitter page from Drake's newest male a capella group calls The Breakdown "Drake University's premiere" group - but since it's an adjective, "premier" should be used.

Twitter page: The Breakdown